Wednesday, 25 January 2012

Treatment for the Opening Sequence "In Your Mind."

FADE IN! James walks into a library/student room and sees an empty table with a pair of earphones. He walks to the table puts them into his ears and realises that he can hear what people are thinking. A girl walks past him and he can hear her thought "Wow he's hot!" A nerdy guy or girl runs past and the thought is "I'm so late, I'm so late, I'm so late." James looks forward and there is an innocent, dressed in pink Eris sitting behind it. He sees her sideways and her hair is covering her face. Eris looks up, she has a lot of black make up around her eyes and the thought he can hear is "DIE!" James closes his eyes and as he opens them Eris is gone and so are the earphones. James's friend Tony comes up to him and James tells him what happens. Tony doesn't take it seriously, thinks James has either studied too much or partied too much and tells him to go home and get some sleep James quickly walks out of the library/student room and as he shuts the door behind him, he looks up and sees Eris. She puts earphones around his neck and starts strangling him. CUT OUT to title of the film "In Your Mind."

1 comment:

  1. An excellent idea.

    Overall so far... level 2 (D). Great research, but you need more planning material here - script, storyboard, shotlist etc.

    Get with your group asap and start planning.

    Get everything on your blog by Fri 27 Feb.

    Matt

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